Atlae Posted December 22, 2017 Share Posted December 22, 2017 Hi guys, I'm supposed to be on LOA right now, but with school wrapping up for the year, I think I can squeeze just a tiny bit of time for this pet project. I don't foresee myself doing anything NS-related besides this, although I am excited for it. This is meant to be somewhat satirical, but I do want it submitted. Constructive criticism is much appreciated. Without further ado, here it is! Quote Security Council Proposal Condemn Queen Yuno A resolution to express shock and dismay at a nation or region. Category: - Select Category -CommendationCondemnationLiberation Nominee: Queen YunoChange Proposed by: The Atlae Isles Draft 1.3 The Security Council, ABHORRED by the raiding activities of Queen Yuno, through their current and former involvements, among others, in The Black Hawks, HYDRA Command, Firehelm, Yuno, Kawaii, Lone Wolves United, Osiris’ Sekhmet Legion, The Invaders, The West Pacific Armed Forces, LILY, and The East Pacific Sovereign Army, which they presently command, in directly destroying countless regional communities, CAUTIONS against the false sense of security that the self-proclaimed Loligarch has lulled into many while Queen Yuno plotted to destroy countless more regional communities through deception, APPALLED by the deceit which Queen Yuno has employed to gain high-ranking positions within countless regions, threatening said regions with invasion and their attempts to destroy large regions from within, ASTONISHED at the significant damage done by Queen Yuno and its network of puppet governments (often with the name Yuno) thereof in the following regions, among others, which took the fatal mistake of letting Queen Yuno in the high ranks of their regional governments: The West Pacific, where Queen Yuno, controlling the government of Yuno Owl, turned The West Pacific Armed Forces (TWPAF) into a formidable raider army designed to do Yuno’s bidding; Yuno Owl’s legacy can still be seen with its successors and students of Yuno Kawaii Village and Altincredible, The South Pacific, where under the puppet of Yun (with the help of fellow puppet Elerivyn), Yuno, as Minister of Military Affairs, subjected the South Pacific Special Forces (SPSF) to raider infiltration, The East Pacific, where under the puppet of Cynthia, Yuno served as Arbiter, a judge on the East Pacifican court, where they used their influence to strip citizenships from countless East Pacificans; and under the main nation of Queen Yuno, which beat long-time natives The Oan Isles and Aelitia in an election to fill Mexregiona’s seat as Delegate-elect, the regional population ballooned to catastrophic proportions due to a ban on emigration, had its Sovereign Army seized by the Delegate, and parts of the East Pacific Executive were revived to spread the propaganda of the Loligarchy; denizens have been subjected to tyrannical rule through “public service announcements” which bombard the region constantly, greater levels of endorsement inequality after the general endorsement cap was raised from 150 to 200, and the iron fist which Yuno has used to consolidate their rule and greatly surpass the endorsement counts of previous East Pacifican Delegates, MILDLY ANNOYED, per the precedent set by SC #1, by the hideous shades of eye-searing hot pink and anime that Queen Yuno has flooded the East Pacific and numerous nameless raid victims with, much to the dismay of non-PsychoQueendoms everywhere, SEEKING to warn other regions of this interregional menace, Hereby CONDEMNS The 愛 Pink-haired PsychoQueendom of Queen Yuno. 3 P.S.: Replies in IC or OOC are fine by me. Willania Imperium and Wyvern 2 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Arotania Posted December 22, 2017 Share Posted December 22, 2017 6 hours ago, Atlae said: NOTING, per the precedent set by SC #1, the hideous shades of eye-searing hot pink and anime that Queen Yuno has flooded the East Pacific and numerous nameless raid victims with, much to the dismay of non-PsychoQueendoms everywhere, Without a doubt the most abhorrent and condemn-worthy behavior displayed by this personified public menace! 6 hours ago, Atlae said: DISTRAUGHT by the PsychoQueendom’s refusal to give up their raiding activity, As far as I understand it (from my admittedly very limited point of view), Yuno is taking a pause from raiding at the moment. Do you want to submit this if/when Yuno continues raiding actively? Or could this be redrafted a bit along the lines of 'Yuno may look like taking a pause, but surely they are carrying out nefarious plans in the background and will emerge an even greater raider and threat to the security of us all! Be warned, it's a trap!!' Overall very nicely written. I like the lighthearted tone. Willania Imperium and Atlae 2 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mediobogdum Posted December 22, 2017 Share Posted December 22, 2017 I like Arontania's suggestion of puffing out the verbiage with the tongue-in-cheek addition of "further plans in the background... " Not sure whether any delay to await further raiding activity by Yuno would help or hinder the SC Proposal. Strike while the iron is hot! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tretroid Posted December 24, 2017 Share Posted December 24, 2017 I know that, while serving as Delegate of TEP, Yuno is currently WA locked, and can't raid for the time being. How about "DISTRAUGHT by the PsychoQueendom’s refusal to give up their support of raiding,"? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Atlae Posted December 24, 2017 Author Share Posted December 24, 2017 25 minutes ago, Tretroid said: I know that, while serving as Delegate of TEP, Yuno is currently WA locked, and can't raid for the time being. How about "DISTRAUGHT by the PsychoQueendom’s refusal to give up their support of raiding,"? Thanks! I have to admit, that was a hard part to replace. Now to address Arotania's thing about plotting, I have now added the new "CAUTIONS" clause. Hope it works! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
States of Glory Posted December 25, 2017 Share Posted December 25, 2017 As much as I'd love to contribute to any draft that gets posted here, my relative inexperience in Gameplay and in the SC means that I'm not well-suited to advise in such matters. That said, in the spirit of humour, I'd personally replace 'NOTING' with 'MILDLY ANNOYED', though the decision is entirely yours. Atlae 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Atlae Posted December 28, 2017 Author Share Posted December 28, 2017 Draft 3 is out! I've added more policy achievements from Yuno, feel free to add some I've missed. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
States of Glory Posted December 28, 2017 Share Posted December 28, 2017 'CAUTIONS' should be 'CAUTIONING'. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
HyFy Posted December 30, 2017 Share Posted December 30, 2017 On 12/24/2017 at 12:56 AM, Tretroid said: I know that, while serving as Delegate of TEP, Yuno is currently WA locked, and can't raid for the time being. How about "DISTRAUGHT by the PsychoQueendom’s refusal to give up their support of raiding,"? What does "WA locked" mean? What does this do to prevent raiding? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Overthinkers Posted December 30, 2017 Share Posted December 30, 2017 6 hours ago, k1213693 said: What does "WA locked" mean? What does this do to prevent raiding? "WA locked" means that, for whatever reason (e.g. being the elected Delegate), a player must keep their WA membership restricted to a specific nation. Thus, they cannot use WA puppets, which are necessary for raiding. HyFy, States of Glory and Willania Imperium 3 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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