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[Proposal] Commend Altino

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Any Member may bring a proposal to discussion before the Hall of Nations by posting it in the appropriate forum.


Given the success of our two previous regional commendations, I would like to propose we consider Altino for our next regional commendation. 

The preparatory work will serve as a case study to the applicability of our Regional Commendations to the Security Council Commendation. 

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I second this proposal and believe Alti to be a worthy candidate. I am happy to contribute to this drawing on some of the things I learned during my stint as ambassador to Karma

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This post will be updated with more information as it is gathered

6/24/20

On 12/22/2017, Alti was the recipient of the TWPAF Medal of Honor bestowed by former delegate Davelands: https://www.nationstates.net/page=rmb/postid=28666484

Forthcoming: analysis of mission reports. 

Notable links:
-Farewell - 

-100 Embassies with Doll Goldur

 

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Here's the first draft (spent the past days researching), feel free to comment and research more information to add.

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The Region of The West Pacific,

Recognizing the importance of The West Pacific Armed Forces (TWPAF), the region's current military organization,

Acknowledging that in TWPAF's current iteration, Altino was Commander from October 2017 to February 2018, 

Honouring the multiple contributions of the nominee in TWPAF, such as:

  • Building the Pirate Theme for TWPAF, including themed rank names,
     
  • Succeeding to get 100 embassies for Doll Guldur, TWP's embassy collector region, as a way to show the regional military's overall success, and
     
  • Creating a lot of activity during their time as Commander, training several members (including future Commanders) and overseeing countless operations,

Appreciating that Altino was honoured with the first ever TWP Medal of Honor by Davelands, at the time Delegate,

Noting that their presence on the region, lasting to the present days, is a source of happiness and joy to the regional residents, and

Believing that Altino's impacts and contributions to The West Pacific are worthy of great respect and merit a commendation of the Region,

Hereby regionally commends Altino.

 

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Looks great so far Gio! There may be minor grammatical suggestions, but I'm focused more on substance. I know that this is a regional commendation, but I wonder how folks feel about acknowledging Alti's track record beyond TWP too as founder of Karma (and I am sure there is more), where she is a masterful cultivator. If it can be added, I would favor it. 

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I think it looks good and does a good job outlining the accomplishments within TWP! It provides proper justification for why this commendation is well deserved.

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