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UTWP Project: Commend The Holy Principality of Saint Mark
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UTWP Project: Commend The Holy Principality of Saint Mark
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Most of what I think has been said by LD already. Some minor things: - Influence has a capital letter, I think you might want to change that. - You might wish to specify what he accomplished during his time as Minister of foreign affairs and what is role as Guardian meant. - Like LD noted, more specified information is needed on his involvement in Albion, Osiris and TSR. Really good first draft, though!